Hey Lianna!
The way you have opened the story is great. Having been immediate thrusted into conflict was exciting and is especially suited to a retelling of a story like Robin Hood. Your writing is very clear- you do a great job of describing all the moving parts (characters, decisions, side conversations) in a way that was cohesive and thrilling.
Including the choices in the text blocks themselves was powerful- every decision made me feel like an active agent in the story. I can’t wait to see where this game goes!
-Jude