Feels like it has lots of potential!
I especially like the presentation, the planets look quite vibrant and colourful and the cartoony style of the character and space ship fit that very nicely. Zooming around in the spaceship is fun, but like others have said, the camera is quite glitchy and keeps clipping on stuff. As was also mentioned in the other comments, I feel that making the objective more clear would help the players to remain invested.