wow, you really did all of that in 3 days?
anyways, the presentation and the art is Amazing, With cool animation and good characther design, also the writing is great.
but il say that there was alot of build up to the actual game, and it kinda disapointed me, maybe making the cutscene a bit shorter and putting more work into the actual gameplay would be nice.
also im pretty sure no one need 10 pages filled with save files. xD