Hey there,
This seems like a really competent little scenario. It's creepy, system agnostic, and could be a good adventure for multiple different games, from dungeon crawlers to edritch horror investigators. I think, for my money, I want something that does a really over the top Castlevania style characters well.
Anyhow, nicely done. I realize this is doing triple duty in several game jams, so has to be zine format, but my only complaint might be I'd like to see a system attached/suggested for it.
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Thanks for the review! The mini zine kept me from fleshing out the NPCs, monsters, and encounters more like I would if I was giving them stats for a particular system. If I expanded on it, I would probably provide stats for either Mork Borg, Troika!, or Into the Odd for no special reason other than those are what I'm playing these days. My next adventure is for Mork Borg and it has more fully fleshed out rules interactions. That should be done by the end of the month for the Last Jam.