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I just want to preface this comment/review with the fact that this will be very mean. I'm not intending to be mean to hurt feelings but to hopefully help inspire. The first chapter of this game sucked. it was terrible in every aspect. Story events were unexplained, characters appeared out of nowhere and they never got properly introduced to other characters, the grammar and spelling was absolutely atrocious, the characters facial expressions shifted between a black screen fade out transition that made it hard to follow, the mc and other characters got together way too quick and it never felt actually real, emotions only affected characters for a few clicks and a lot more. I'm saying this in hopes that the dev actually has/ will make plans to do a full overhaul of this chapter (preferably soon) because it got to the point where I almost couldn't keep playing, I would rather have to replay the entire game and actually learn to love and get to know the characters than deal with the current thing, stuff sucked. That was until I got to the scene at the end of ch 1, things at that point turned around and after that things are actually amazing, there are still a few quirks here and there but the quality went from bad to really good in one chapter, I also hope that if someone considering the game is reading this, get the damn game, push through ch 1 and enjoy the amazing time after.

CH1 is meant to recieve a whole remake, but to be fair it's not my priority right now, my priority is going forward, once that is done I'll be able to fully rework it


Thanks for your feedback and I'm still glad that you felt an improvement.

Just to chip in, I agree with what's being said here... however I have to note, the poor grammar and spelling continues past the first chapter. That is no better than it was in the first chapter, I highly recommend the author gets an editor because it is very bad