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Nice idea, and I think that forcing you to fill one page before moving onto the next is a cool and unique concept I've never seen before in a programming game. There are a bunch of little things which drag down the experience, though-- As an example, it's hard to tell how many tiles you need to move, since each tile is actually made of four smaller tiles. The GUI when you're writing in the book is also a little confusing. Next time you make a game, try having someone else beta test it for you, and where they get confused, add something to help explain to the player how it works. It always helps me a ton, and I think it would help you make stuff even better.

Thank you for your feedback! I will try to get more playtesting by others next time. It seems that a lot of people got confused by the tile system, so I will try to figure that out if I make a full release.