Wow, this story definitely caught me by surprise! The art is wonderful, both characters and backgrounds. I really dug the '80s fashions, too! And the music sets the mood wonderfully throughout
I did find it difficult to understand the player character's motivations at times; sometimes the way she expressed herself felt a bit too casual for the situations she was in.
Good luck as you keep working on it! I'm looking forward to playing more of your games!