This game was recommended to me by a friend when I mentioned I was getting into visual novels. It was pretty fun, but it just being a test-run shows. There are a significant amount of typos, the plot is-- as described by the creator, shallow, the art is a bit lazily done (character sprites are incomplete below the dialogue box) and it'd be fine if it didn't show every time a new scene generated.
Because it's free and short, I think it was worth the play. I laughed at a few parts and enjoyed it.