I love the art style! The game looks very intriguing and I'll probably play it when it comes out. Good luck!
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I played the Steam version and will be downloading the itch.io counterpart shortly. I loved the game! I got Damion's route and this is one of my favorite visual novels. The only problems I have with it are the forced personality of the MC (I really don't like their insanely high ego) and the MC liking all characters with no apparent backstory with them, save for Zero.
(Deleted my post in game jams because I realized it was the wrong forum.)
If you need a writer to write/help with the dialogue/story/whatever for your game, I'd be happy to help! I'm interested in most genres besides nsfw, with the most experience I have being in science fiction. I have some (incomplete) e books I can show you if you want to see my experience, alongside a game on itch.io on my old account that I put on hiatus. I don't have any experience beyond that; this is how I've decided to get experience.
Because I'm looking to work in game jams & want experience, my service is free. All requests appreciated!
Will not write for official/non-indie games. I can write for games that aren't in game jams, too.
Spoilers inbound.
When I launched the game it started me in the middle of another scene, which I really wasn't expecting. I don't know if it's a glitch, or just really bad pacing. When I kept playing, the rest of the game made up for that. Talking to May made me feel happy, and I could relate to a lot of the problems in-game. When I got the good ending I cried.
But there's another aspect of the game that should be discussed. It's realistic. Painfully so. I've had numerous friends come to me with suicidal thoughts (mostly online), and it takes a lot of attention and work. This game actually makes you feel like someone else's life is in your hands, and if you don't spend every other second you have to care for them, they die. That's what it felt when my friends came to me with suicidal thoughts. Exactly how it felt.
You can look at that as either bad and depressing, or good and transparent. Regardless, the game is great, and it's definitely worth the fifteen minutes it takes to play.
Spoilers incoming.
The pacing is a bit off at first, but I'd imagine that's what it feels like for someone who has amnesia. I got three suicide endings before finally getting the good one. The metaphors, symbolism, and overall writing/message is incredible; alongside the visual art. The "about" says it was based on true events, and I'm sorry to Angela if you actually had to experience these things. This game is definitely worth your time to play.
This game was recommended to me by a friend when I mentioned I was getting into visual novels. It was pretty fun, but it just being a test-run shows. There are a significant amount of typos, the plot is-- as described by the creator, shallow, the art is a bit lazily done (character sprites are incomplete below the dialogue box) and it'd be fine if it didn't show every time a new scene generated.
Because it's free and short, I think it was worth the play. I laughed at a few parts and enjoyed it.