Maybe slow down the pace a bit or maybe add in a time skip. It feels like the story progresses very fast in the last like 10 - 20min
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Thank you for the input. There is some more information on F95, but suffice it to say things were slightly changed in the prologue. However, there is a reason that a particular someone, and not the MC, is pushing for speed.
More will be revealed in updates. Next one is out February 5th on F95 and itch.io.
i didint find anything moving too quickluy..
are you referring to the language used vs actions taken by Alex?
i think that might be a misinterpretation, because alex has a 'bitchy' attitude (she likes to playfully insult/banter), and that is not going to change just because she starts to like you, its part of her personality.. and she likes you because you have accepted her bitchy personality