Just curious but i saw on patreon English isnt your first language. Im not exactly experienced on how these games are made but if i can help id like to help you with the dialogue.
I write in spanish, after that I traslate it to english. at the moment a girl (native english) is helping me with some parts that I'm not sure. after I lauch the game for patreons, and a dude (tester) fix my gramaticals errors. for the moment this is working buy if I need another tester maybe I will contact you.