I had a nice experience with this game! Nice flow between narrative and gameplay! It was interesting having to roll for dialogue choices.
I would have liked to have some more influence on the choices themselves to the point they'd be somewhat random, but not truly random. I like the skill point system, but it feels like I was holding out to get enough skill points to do the options I really wanted. Perhaps a way of loading the dice for better chances at some values. I think there's a bunch of interesting ways to design around a system of influencing random numbers to progress dialogue.
The little DDR segment was really cool too! I think a quick way to make it easier would be giving a each direction a separate color. And also adding a bit more juice when an arrow is successfully "played".
Real nice game and unique design! Great Job!
- Josh