The audio and art are really nice, but I just couldn't get through all the text. Even with text speed all the way up and holding down shift, there is just too much. When I died on the third level and pressed continue, I was respawned with 0 stamina. I had to restart the game from the beginning and go through the text again. Gave up at that point.
The text is funny, but gets repetitive and tedious over time. Rather than bombarding the player with so much up front I'd sprinkle it throughout. Less is more.
I think you've got something good here, the vibe was fun. I just think the experience needs to be streamlined a bit more.