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I've started on Chapter Two just now...this twist has me....flustered but in a good way. You're telling a very good story here. Just as I thought maybe I had messed up on a route that I that I wanted to take...nope....WHATA TWIST!! I've become heavily intrigued and if I were to try to play this all in one go...I'd never get any sleep tonight! Easily Top Five VN for me. Thank you for the hard work you've put into this! 

I like how you've explained things, it's all very believable, and true to the Sci-Fi narrative, it feels like a lot like the classics back from the 70s and 80s novels I've read, which is a compliment. I also feel that cliché but enjoyable anime theme you've put into it, it's made this a very unique story unlike anything I've ever read. 

Feels Good bruh! 

I do have one complaint, it feels so far like the beginning of Chapter Two has way less choices than Chapter One did, but it doesnt hurt the story at all, even if they were not important, it would have been nice to have a few more choices than what we got, something to make it feel less linear. 


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Glad that you've been enjoying the game! I've tried to make an adult story that keeps the player's interest and it seems folks have appreciated it!

As for the reduction in choices during week 2, I think that's a result of the number of potential routes being whittled down. Once you start interacting with less characters, that only leaves choices inside their actual scenes. For week 3, I'm hoping to add more of these types of choices and they will definitely have an influence on the final week as well as the endings. Thanks for the feedback!

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AH! I didnt think about that! I did end up heavily limiting the number of characters I could interact with so it makes sense to me now...which makes me retract my complaint!