Edit:
Short Video Story, My Opinion is from a Game Design POV not from the Story and Meaning of this Poem
The Poem is Good and the Content is also well Choosen.
Original:
mhh Not sure really what to say about.
It doesnt feel like something.
The Idea so far is cool, Videos as Visual Novel is interesting.
But u need more Content so it makes fun to Read the Story, More Choices and everything.
Hi! Thanks for your comment. This is a short poem presented in a visual and interactive way, and the choice I made to make it very small and simple was deliberate, so I don't need to add more content or choices as you might in a traditional game. I'm posting this in case other people may read your feedback and feel like they can't share their work because it might not fit into a traditional game style. Thanks!
