I like the reference of the storyline, also the banner's pic and looks cool. Is it planned to get my pointer refer to "footer"-subtext when hovering the lower textlines in-game (sounds more like a placeholder-info)? I'd prefer visualizing the visited lines same as unvisited ones in colours.
typos:
"You walk over to Hiro" ... there's the reply-icon and a bracket that don't suits there? btw: it's the part where I could get a closer look at that "strange machine".
Some prev. lines also includes the whole sentence marked in blue/as clickable, even that bracket-icon which represents just the start of a new option for replying.
"creamery", hannah's reply won't include that arrow starting-icon? ("moving closer" to that line e.g. includes the whole line as clickable blue text even that arrow somehow), I'd prefer it like the weight/inventory, that only a specific noun or verb, adjective being highlighted there. Same as one of the lines withing the bakery, before heading out of that pastry room & wonkavision-mk1 (grab an object examining that path before skipping to mk2).
doubled paragraphs?
I was clicking "leaving the inventing-room", after that machine do require to talk to Wonka, I even didn't intro to other guys just heading into the adventure xD when Wonka mentioned if we'd head on, I could still ask about 2 things, one including that boat. Nope, still no preference for now ...want to simply skip it.
Similar to:
eating one size of dough. getting back to the bakery, checking weight. not eating additional ones, while "back"-option includes again: eat one dough?
mk2, insisting me wearing that VR, while I guess the ending-sequence being kinda "broken" / should refer to a different in-game line?