Apologies for not responding to this sooner, I dismissed the email then forgot about it. I appreciate you pointing out some of the inconsistencies with the arrows. Some of these can probably be fixed, but it is a huge pain in the neck to format things in twine from their sluggish editor, so I gave up on keeping them perfectly standardized somewhat early on. If or when I make a second version, I will probably be using tweego, which lets you edit in whatever text program you like, and I'll try to see if I can make these more standardized.
Sure, no worries. Hoping my detailled feedback won't sound too picky because of even referring to section where they occur, like which part getting chosen, at least you maybe find the textlines if I'd mention where I was noticing those "issues" (that's my origin thought about just e.g. single arrows getting marked as underline/clickable there, maybe also happens on paths I didn't examined yet). At least if I just played this game once, you'd know which sections I was viewing and which were not played or tested yet.