Pretty engaging, I like it! One day perhaps you could try integrating your text adventure skills with a game engine, and then making a visual novel or sorts. (Don't mind me, I get inspired for other people's sakes)
Thanks !. :D. Glad You Like It. :3. And, Yes. It's Just A Matter Of Time. I Have Learned RenPy Engine. So When I Can Drawing And Have A Pc. I Will Recreate All My Games That Use Twine With A RenPy Engine. :)