I liked the story and the game itself, but the gameplay was REALLY frustrating. There was one thing that really bothered me, its inconsistency. Sometimes I would do something, like dash, and be able to go through fine, and other times I would do the same dash in the exact same position, and would stop suddenlly and fall on a spike. The gameplay itself, reminds me of Celeste, with the dash mechanic, and I think the game is pretty charming.
There was a bug in the camera, where when I died it would slide slightly to the left. As I died too much in that one screen, the spikes in the right wall went offscreen and I could only guess where they were. It could use some feedback for the player's death, as sometimes I died for no apparent reason. I also think that the spike hitboxes were very punishing.
Other than that, the game is extremely charming, the graphics are cute and fit the game pretty well, and the story is just beautiful. I think I was just bothered with the pusnishing gameplay. Great job!