The overall idea and game athmosphere really have a huge potential: guiding a girl in a messed world not just by that supossed incident, also by that ghetto ambient where she lives. Don't worry about ending quality (I know doing things in 4 days can be really tough), saw that people still have a not-so-out-of-control party, since the cake is still intact haha!
I'm not a huge friend of SFXR based FX but that's ok for this alpha haha.
See you in another production ;)