Summary:

I was nauseous. I have some FPS issues (sometimes in VR as well), when there's no proper HUD, or something to not allow me to concentrate on rather than the whole screen.

What I liked:

• Tutorial in-game
• Easy to understand objectives
• It had sounds
• Music was nice

What I didn't like:

• Holding forward and pressing jump did not work if you're against a platform
• Some text hard to read (light text on light background)
• Terrible voice acting
• Jumping in the pool had no splash sounds
• Controls were way too touchy
• No actual theme connection
• Music didn't loop properly

So-so:

• The colored lights were cool

Closing:

FPS Platforming sucks in general, it's hard to do right, especially in a game jam. Especially if you have tight jumps. So not sure I was the right target audience for this, it ended up getting a bit frustrating with the precise jumping in First Person. Had to give up after trying to get to the yellow tower 5 times (once I was literally right there, but of course, I somehow fell off the platform) 

I think some level design improvements, fixes to the issues I had, additions to tweak controls would make for a great patch.