Well, to be honest, the artstyle is very awesome! And loved nearly all in this game, also interesting concept. I'd like just to mention, that the controls seems to be a little bit slow(the character movement and the subtitles). Also, thought, you should add some kind of level loading, because it takes some time after death(also, it crashed one time after death). So, I just think, that you should work more on this project after gamejam, because it has great potential!!!
Great game, well done <3