This is perhaps my favorite review*-* It left me feeling warm and happy. But more than that, it's really amazing that you took out the time to give such detailed feedback. It's truly valuable and helps me improve the game. You raised some really solid points and I'll be sure to address them in future updates of the game.
PS. I'll play and rate your game as well, it has a really cool vibe and I love trying out story driven games!