I liked the concept, the story was nice and it's well connected to the theme of the jam! Even though the long distances and empty places felt like a part of the theme, it felt like a bit much of walking back and forth where it didn't happen very much, and a little hard to anticipate how far you would be able to travel in the sun. Maybe it would be better if the distances were shorter and the sun more dangerous, or something like that. The eyeball-things were heckin scary. Great job overall!