1. The story was told through a computer screen, using a cursor as the player, and used a mix of reconverging plot and choices of endings. This is a all super cool idea!
2. I think that this choice made very good use of the limitations of bitsy, and was generally a very clever idea for a game!
3. My game focuses on a similar idea, and your take on it is so cool! The computer idea was really well integrated, and the choices were clearly defined and the branching felt like pretty natural story progression. Also, nice work on the writing!