I definetely think that with more time and dedication it could be a great experience! Sound is great, but the graphics takes me out of the experience a lil' bit. I think there should be some kind of transitions between scenes because it feels abrupt and some text on the screen feels weird. Also expanding more the duration would be great.
Other than that, good job and keep it up!
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Thank-you for your feedback. I didn't have time for polish, which would have included scene transition and text delays and other such things. I had also planned for at least 4 more scenes but time was against me.
I don't agree necessarily with your dedication comment; for the few evenings I had on this project, I felt it was more important on delivering a key message than to have something super polished. My dedication was at maximum whilst I took care of personal and professional commitments during this time, including family, home, financial, work and other such commitments.
