Hi there!
Firstly I just wanna mention I sincerely appreciate your feedback & I'll be working on improving these issues! I'm actually shocked you made a whole video about my Demo Game which I'm greatly honoured for! I had a friend help me out with the story script his name is Allan Parker and he's great at this! - https://brokemypencil.ca ; And as for the voice-acting part I used Voice AI Generator by - https://replicastudios.com/.
Wishing you a wonderful day!
Oh, I did not realize it was a demo, I will have to add that to the game description/title then. I have a playlist for demos and alike. I am glad my criticism could be of use to you, and of course I would make a vidio of a game like this! It is of great quality I would say! :) I noticed several grammatical errors in the notes but decided not to mention this in my feedback. If you need some proof reading, i would gladly help out. I can highlight the errors and write possible corrections next to them if you want me to.
