I think if you check out the discord you would see that the grammar is fine for the most part. It's just how I word things and my proofreader keeps that in, there is no reason to nitpick about that since I'm not a native english speaker :P.
And the pacing is not really sped up. Ingame weeks are six days instead of seven and the Pregnancy with Sandra already started during the vacation - That's when she said she will stop taking the pill. So, about 3 ( ingame ) weeks later, she doesn't get her period when she is supposed to and makes pregnancy tests. It all matches up if you read everything carefully ;).