I thought this was a cool little experience, I made it to the mall and ... it didn't end well for me. I think the writing is pretty good, the humor of the clickable prompts is fine, not sure about the monster drink but maybe that's an insider? However, as a school project, this has a good atmosphere, is successful enough in setting up the story and I thought that it got quite spoopy. I had fun with this, thank you!
Also: ignore the cringe-comment, it's neither constructive nor funny, in fact, it is quite cringe.