Hi,
1) Love the game (considering becoming Patreon)
2) Some of the text doesn't seem to be translated into English (a few screens here and there)
3) In quite a few parts of the story, you make quite a few errors in grammar/spelling. Considering I'm already in love with your work, I'd be willing to proofread it and help improve this (for free of course). Please consider it, I've noticed it the most in s1 (since I'm currently going through that but it's also present in s2) and correcting these problems would seriously improve the experience I think.