What an impressive intro! Loved the cool character, the great music and voice work, and the general atmosphere you created for this game. I think you really nailed the aesthetic you were going for. That being said, there's a few things that I think are kind of holding me back from loving this. First, I could not figure out for the life of me what to do. I read the instructions and still couldn't figure it out. Second, It looks like the art for the foreground and background really clash, like maybe they were from different art sets or just made in different resolutions, or just poorly scaled and blurry. It can be a little ugly at times, which is only noticeable because the other artwork just looks like it had so much care put into it. I think the story for this one really could have been great had you had more time to expand on it. The particle effects when the sun is rising were really cool how they just gradually show up, and I love how it is almost a pleasant happy moment when the sun takes you.
Overall though, great work!