Thanks for the feedback, I will definitely keep your advice on the intro in mind - you are 100% right (I know cos all the times I playtested got a little much).
I am sorry for the game experience I didn't quite get were I wanted and rather than not submit as I was excited to do a first Jam I let it be un winnable. I really had the concept down to be a lot better with morality choices and I pictured a proper ending (although no way I could do that in Jam time).
Goal for next Jam = playable and payer can win.
;)