The art was really well done and the ghost design was awesome!
A little touch I really liked was how those eyes glowed in the dark sometimes. The maniacal laughter on death got me; I thought it was really cool and loved how your character's 'light' goes off when it happens! The story was really sweet though multiple playthroughs to get both endings felt detrimental when the scares are already known. Loved how you've pulled off the infinite forest.
I should add that I loved the little detail where the guy mentions ghosts.org at the intro and the bad ending has him hyped about how readers would love this!
This was really good!