Thanks for your review! I appreciate it!
Most of the points you made were really apt and I hope to learn from them.
I had planned the story to be a bit ambiguous and open to interpretation, so that the plot can happen anywhere and anytime at the near future. Hence, the story would be more discernible from the dialog and endings. However, I do understand that some ideas might have got diluted and affected the narration.
But I think you have got the basic gist of the story and I am happy you got the Metropolis reference! Due to the direction of the storyline, I decided that it would be more appropriate as a conversation with an inebriated person in the CYBER CAFE than anything else.
On a side note, there are actually 3 endings currently in the game and from your review, it seems that you might have missed the third one which could give more more context and perspective to the plot. While I would like to keep it more of a discovery by the players, I will give a hint- its called the "Ambrosia Route". Hope that helps!
Anyway, thanks for trying this out! Cheers!