It didn't go so well for me but I liked the aesthetic and enjoyed the dialogue outside of the keep. It also sounds as though you have already addressed most of the issues that I had so I would be interested to check things out again post jam.
@ Mana I'm sorry to hear that it didn't go so well for you. I've made several changes that should make the game seem less relentless. I've also added two new levels and a few other surprises so I hope you stop back for the post gamejam release and give it another shot.