Thank you for playing! What can i do to make the storytelling better?
Well, I am not the most amazing game developer out there and this is my opinion but,
Introduction takes WAY too long.
I was , without an objective, running from room to room, clicking on every object on my way, just in case some progression may happen.
I got jumpscared, felt lost and kept looping around the place before things started and game became good.
Maybe you should try to always keep an objective (or at least a reason to roam) obvious for the player.
(read some articles maybe?)
Thanks for your submission btw