Not really. Most information on Google is more accurate and better written than this. Also there's quite a lot on Google which would be more relevant to post as a comment about the game on here.
I think they're using it for English practice, and with that in mind, it's not bad for someone who's studying English as a second language. Definitely worth continuing to work on improvement, but it's coherent and understandable, if not technically correct all the time.