Hey! This is such a lovely and honestly thorough comment, so first of all thank you so much! I appreciate your insight and oh my gosh your enthusiasm!
It's definitely on my to-do list to re-port the demo, I don't think it'd be too tough for me to do? I'll tinker with it during my downtime before I work on the next update for sure. Thank you for mentioning it too - the more ppl who do the more incentive I'll have to get off my butt and do it lol.
That's a good point about the pronoun changes, I don't think it's just you or that you missed something. I make tweaks, changes, and cuts to the script ALL the time lmao so I'm not surprised if I cut a scene down here and there and didn't notice that I removed context for the pronoun change. Plus I re-shuffle conversations around too. If memory serves Kite has a convo with Balsam about it before the mission, but I might have wanted to make the change earlier in this version of the script and messed up that continuity somewhere. It's worth making a second pass and updating the script - it's totally like, a major plot point that would be worth getting just right.