So, I'm a bit ahead of the evaluation period, but I figured I'd give this one a shot.
- Excellent graphics. They look incredibly polished.
- The music was a good choice and fit the mood very well. However, it failed to loop, and I spent most of the game without music playing.
- I love how the alarm sound effect is panned such that you can tell which monitor is the one giving the alarm by ear.
- The 'scan' mechanic was nice, but either had too few levels, or was too random in how it used them. I ended up playing the same 2 levels over and over while getting others only once. I got the one with the two blocks sliding up and down about six times in my playthrough.
- I think the upload goes up way too slowly, or you don't have enough to do. I ended up opening a reddit window on my other monitor and scrolling while I waited, because I was getting stretches of thirty seconds with nothing happening.
All in all, a great concept and great presentation, but hurt by the two big issues higlighted above.
Great job!