Heloooooooooooo I just played this demo! Here's my feedback:
Maps look good! You got real creative with them!
Some spelling mistakes in the dialogue, nothing too major! Text also gets cut off a bit a few times.
I feel like some interactable would go a long way.
The Random Encounter rate is a little too high, I think.
Story seems p interesting so far! I like it.
I've never used MZ so I'm not sure if this is default or whatever, but I like the little folder-menu thingy in the corner for people who play via touch.
Also did Kanja's mom fricking SELL HER?????????????
Anyway, keep on gaming! You're doing great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!