Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Mapping is my specialty, so I'm very happy it's working out.
I agree with all of your critiques. I have big plans for the story (bad guy has motives) but the intro narrative is definitely executed poorly and needs some work. I hope to add more interesting lore hints in the starting area too.
All the nitpicky stuff I definitely agree with, and I've already fixed most of them for my next release. Thank you for the note on the prices though, as I missed that one. It will be fixed!
The honesty and the positivity I've received from everyone gives me a ton of motivation to continue, so I really appreciate it.