It's a very well thought out story, in a gothic, mystery style, with so much potential, I love playing it so far and It's definately a game to look out for, 4 stars on a few hours play so far, which I could easily review to a 5, It's got so many different styles and choices without being overwhelming with them and the story is engrossing, good work :)
BTW MC is moving along nicely within your choice of where he goes and what he does, the balance is almost 100% spot on for me, the story is captivating and mysterious, just what is expected of MC being a mystery, how he becomes a success/failure, I'm eager to find out, I updated to 5 stars on completion of chap 3, your work is hard and paying off, keep it up, if I was better financially right now I'd invest in this, I like it a lot. You are someone to watch for story/game development in future I think. Just 1 guys honest opinion.