BTW MC is moving along nicely within your choice of where he goes and what he does, the balance is almost 100% spot on for me, the story is captivating and mysterious, just what is expected of MC being a mystery, how he becomes a success/failure, I'm eager to find out, I updated to 5 stars on completion of chap 3, your work is hard and paying off, keep it up, if I was better financially right now I'd invest in this, I like it a lot. You are someone to watch for story/game development in future I think. Just 1 guys honest opinion.