While the game isn't perfect it definitely made me feel something and it wasn't boredom. And I'm sure, it's not just me who thinks so. So congratulations, you delivered your message!
Overall, the game is well-made, but in my opinion there is things that can be improved:
- Probably it's a good idea to add background music and sounds. Game feels empty soundwise. Also It'll help to set the mood.
- Some SE sounds strange, for example, kitchen sink.
- As already mentioned, it's really easy to skip large part of the game.