I like the story you were adding behind this game, but it was kind of confusing to me. Heres a few things I have to say about it:
- The pixel art was nice, but looked kind of inconsistent to me(Unless that is the style you were going for, then don't mind this). Did you resize some of the objects in the game through Unity's scaling? If so, it would be best not to.
- I feel the pacing of the game was kind of slow. I like the dialogue added, but I wasn't really getting much from the game, especially because the player was walking slow as well.
- The jumping was kind of hard as I couldn't really get back on the platforms.
- I got lost and wasn't entirely sure where I was supposed to go. I think the camera ended up moving as well and I just coulnd't find the player.
This game could become even better with a bit of reworking. But, I liked the direction you were going with this game.