Great job...It's a really really emotional game....Quickly....simple...beautiful and has a really strong message...Well Done! For the suggestion...Try to make a singular character because the player art style is very very similar to the game Sky....including the cape, style of walk, hair...etc...But....In general, it's a big idea with much potential to make a good and emotional game for everyone to cry at the end...I hope to see your title available in an extended version on Steam or PlayStore.
When you have time, please play my game and send me feedbacks too:
https://kamo-art.itch.io/the-dark-memories-of-a-blind-past - WebGL https://kamo-art.itch.io/darkmemories-blindpast-wbuild - Windows Build