Played this on stream. Check out the vod here for my thoughts. https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1007516720?t=01h20m44s
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Thanks so much for playing this on stream - I'm sorry I didn't manage to catch it live! Also really nice to see your own submission running. That caught my attention when I saw it in the list, but I don't tend to use Twitch all that much so wasn't sure how best to get a look at it.
You make a good point about having the mirror links be the only ones to move onto a new passage mid-paragraph. Colour-coding the different types would be an elegant solution. I'd also like to put a bit more effort into the presentation (and possibly add audio) if I come back to this: the time limit for Ludum Dare did limit it somewhat, but I'm thrilled to know it ended up getting a place in your list of jam favourites! I'll be sure to check out some of the others.