-The sleep message (skips a day) should probably be changed to something like ends the day, as its a bit misleading
-Serena's price is listed as both 40k and 20k during different dialogues.
-The house repair for Azula is listed at 3k price early on, but suddenly becomes 750
-For Ferry her scenes require you to go at noon, but occur at the normal evening shes there so that's a bit weird.
-After talking to Rita and asking for more time, you can go to the mage guild and work for her which seems a bit off.
-Besides that the rep grind per story segment feels a bit overly long, perhaps dropping the rep reqs to 5 instead of 10 would make it feel more reasonable as often the content per 20/30 rep is very very short. Content itself is pretty good though and game has potential.