I like how the different voices were interesting and distinct, especially for something so short. However, I'm not sure I understand what happened, if anything. I think it's about multiple narrators, and the "main" one has just become one of them? An interesting concept on its own, but the execution could've been better. The different colours help a bit in distinguishing between them, but overall it feels a little chaotic. Also it ends very abruptly. I guess it's as the description said, though - "There is no story."
I hope this feedback helps.