Cool twist at the end! Made me want to see what the other endings were like. There are a couple issues with the sound mixing, the sound effect at the end of the rally is really loud and jarring even though I was expecting something like it. The music looping is also very noticeable at times, it seems to cut out and restart in the middle of the song sometimes.
The dialogue was also a little stiff I found, and there were a fair few typos, but the story itself was pretty interesting